new designs

I did some new sketches of the guy's head. I'm trying to get him to look a little more like what you would think of as a "propeller head." So, he’s sort of anal retentive about rules and time and doesn’t really think outside the box, but more in a nerdy way than in a grumpy way, if that makes sense.

Anyway, here are the sketches, and any suggestions would be really helpful since I'm about to start maquettes with basically no feedback on this new version.



I also have another drawing of the girl's face. Not much has changed, just a couple of extra things to make her look a little more like a mechanical person.